Ive fainally been able to log into my university email without any problems so can now reflect on my work so far and the fedback I was given regarding my blog. As Sharon said at the time I did need to make more references to Elizabethan style/make-up/fashion. I agree I did need o do this and added a post after this feedback about the Elizabethan fashion styling in the Film Elizabeth the golden age and how the outfits and colours they were wearing would have had meaning in Elizabethan times do to the cost of dyes and the associations of wearing particular colours.
Sharon also mentioned that she would like to see me draw more so befre altering my face chart for my final design I sketched and coloured some pictures of what my design would look like from a side view on a little cartoon like pesron rather than just drawing another face chart.
I have tried to refence my last few blogs as I had previously not been doing it correctly using the Harvard method. Sharon said to me not to wory about going back and rferencing the whole blog as I did list websites I had taken information from, but to Harvard reference any of my future work. I have attempted this with the last couple of posts that required referencing and I found this VERY confusing so is something I definitley need to work on in future. I was rather pleased with my overall feedback as I wasnt sure If I had just been writting a load of rubbish for the past weeks so definitley cheered me up :)
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